some people decided to have children at a later age than in the past

some people decided to have children at a later age than in the past. Why? Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

SAMPLE ANSWER:

INTRODUCTION:

To stay in this competitive era, Every person must need to do hard work in order to get a satisfied and more comfortable lifestyle. In the past, people did not think more about their family planning because of less competition in each and every field, but nowadays due to ever-increasing technological advancement Most people face a lot of trouble in the life,  So they decide to have a child after stable in their life with the proper family planning.  I think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages.

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In the past, people were not more educated and due to less education as they were not able to make a proper family planning. Other than that, in the past, many people had an orthodox mentality. To be specific, they think that if they have a child in an early stage so after sometimes this child is helpful to earn money in order to support the Family. On the other side, This trend has changed totally and nowadays most people are educated enough to have a child before they are stable in life. Moreover, to survive in this competitive Lifestyle, most people need a handsome amount of money, for this reason, many people first think about their career because only this is only options which give him satisfying life starts and if people have enough money so they can also rear their child carefully.

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There are also some disadvantages to having a child at a later age. Firstly, if any person gives first priority to his career, then it will take more years to stable in life and at that time the age of having a baby is gone, So at the later age, people play lots of trouble to rearing their child properly. Furthermore, if any family wants to be financially stable than they have no proper time to take care of their baby, So it leads to negative development on their child.

CONCLUSION:

In conclusion, despite having several drawbacks of a child later at and age, but I think the advantages of it is greater than the disadvantage in terms of a financially stable and proper caring.

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